Friday, May 11, 2012

Amazing Poets!

We have been working very hard on our poetry unit in writing.  Everyone is doing such a great job!  I'm very impressed and so proud. Below are a few examples of the amazing work I get to read every day!  Great job poets!!

Eagle
by-Austin
Eagles soar though
the light blue sky
So high, So high
Living in their
Nest
So high, So high
Swooping down, down, down
So low, so low

Sun
by-Jasmeen
Sun, sun, shine at me
Your so bright when you
look at me.  We need you
for light you make me
go out of sight.
Oh sun, oh sun.

Clock
by-Lara
Tic toc.
You tick every second by.
Tic toc.
Keep going.
Don't stop.
Tic toc.
Mysterious clock.
Tic toc.
Stop!
YOU ARE FREAKING ME OUT!